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All Deviations
All Deviations


Took control while I was still
stumbling,
setting the stage for
young ones not yet old enough to
think in the way of the world
and

what a world!
what a world!

With history speaking in whispers,
diseased as are our children,
some ill-translated spin
pursued by progress;
unforgiving and
unforgiven.

What a world.
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Descent!

une collaboration avec:
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*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: Apr 4, 2008, 11:42:12 PM
it was great writing with you...
in any language

xo!

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interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
~Sub-Mixie:iconSub-Mixie: Apr 7, 2008, 1:12:51 PM
I don't understand the first stanza, but I like its flow.
And I love the rest of the poem!!

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I swerve out of control
~Blue-Bard:iconBlue-Bard: Apr 12, 2008, 6:58:27 AM
Am I smelling a political undertone. Someone's seething. Thoughtful piece.

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Oooohhh sweet mama! Bring it on home to your grandma!

-Some weird old song